"Great Scott, Potter, This is War!"
Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
By Aaran St Vines
Reviews
noylj posted a comment on Saturday 30th December 2006 9:29am for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
I REALLY don't care for this Hermy. I can see canon Hermy believeing in her books, but even she has to know that books are only as good as the authors. How she can have such an attitude to spell mongering, which should be very fascinating to her, is beyond me.
Jason9 posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 3:54pm for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
PUMPED to have the new chapter. This is one of my most eagerly awaited story updates. I love the direction you are taking with this, and espicially the characters involved. Your characterizations are spot on, and your OC's are fantastic. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the great work
kainboa posted a comment on Saturday 23rd December 2006 4:20am for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
great story so far, can't wait to see the next update
keep up the great work :)
jb238 posted a comment on Friday 22nd December 2006 10:44pm for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
Fascinating and unique story! I like the scientific approach and the spell mongering. Also Harry getting closer to Dobby and Elfin culture and magic.
knightsbridge posted a comment on Thursday 21st December 2006 6:46pm for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
This is truly one of the best fics. I have read...even though this chapter was a long time coming. I have told others about it; those who were looking for something new and original with no slash or other weird things that an HP character would never do (especially HP/SS slash), and yet authors seem to get off on it, as do many reader's.
Thanks for the update,
Happy Christmas and Boxing Day.
gallandro_83 posted a comment on Thursday 21st December 2006 6:10pm for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
Hello
I want to start off ny saying this is a wonderful story that I enjoy wholeheartedly but wish that updates were a little faster in coming out.
I love the way you have broken down magic and can't wait to see just what else you will turn around in JKR's world.
I did however have one question as someone that wears glasses how come Harry hasn't tried to mogner a spell to help fix his eyesight? I could imagine it to be an odd charm to practice with since it is for self tranfiguration mostly but especially in Harry's circumstances I would think the benifit outweighs most risks.
Hope to see more soon.
Gallandro
Rich posted a comment on Thursday 21st December 2006 11:47am for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
Brilliant, I come here to have a look on the odd chance of an update, and end up having 2 chapters to read.
Glad to see that things are still progressing to the same high standard, and really enjoyed it. (so much so its now almost 2am and i have an interview tomorrow (or should that be today.)
Really looking forward to the next chapter, and dont care how long it takes.
Cheers
Rich
Matthew Terlich posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 7:40pm for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
Great story! Really enjoyed the update and some more explanation of mongery.
Cheers!
Jeff1 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 2:07pm for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
Yay!!! Thanks for posting another chapter. I have always thought that a Harry that thinks things through before acting whenever possible would be a dangerous person. Wonderful job portraying him.
anonymous5 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 1:21pm for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
I've been reading this latest installment and find myself enjoying it even more than the rest - definitely worth the wait! One little thing jumped out at me... "As she was speaking Tallow pulled out a picture of the historic site, as she spoke." A bit redundant. Spectacular chapter, though - thanks for posting it!!
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 10:10am for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
It should be interesting to see Snape's reactions to these events, particularly after he finds out that Harry is an adult with all the rights and responsibilities that confers. It's one thing to go after a minor student; it's another entirely when the other party is perfectly within their rights and responsibilites to respond in appropriate measure.
Crys posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 9:54am for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
Interesting insights into the goblin association structure.
Remus is dating? Huh. I'm not following this story as closely as I should, but I don't recall who it is, or if we have even been told.
I notice that Harry keeps calling him "your precious Professor Snape". Good touch, that. Makes it clear that AD has a much higher opinion of him than anyone else.
> Or is your mercy for those leaning towards the Dark discriminating against those leaning towards the Light?
Oh, I like this line
*raised eyebrow* If every female Paladin who sees him tries to jump him, why didn't Hermione? And did whoever else it was in the Great Hall not see him?
Fun story. Now off to read the differences in the GD chapter.
KateHC posted a comment on Wednesday 20th December 2006 4:26am for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations
Wow! That was both long and densely packed. You presented a great deal of information in a lively manner. Thanks
sylvelle posted a comment on Thursday 18th June 2015 9:31pm for Chapter Eleven - Conversations and Confrontations