TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 14th August 2008 1:25pm for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

good chapter.

gunny

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 6th September 2006 12:19am for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

Once again I adore your detailed descriptions of how magic works and the advances of magic compared to muggle research. Harry creating new spells so quickly is incredibly amusing. I'm not offended by the godfather being literal idea, but I would say that at the time Harry was born, most children were still baptised and had Godparents whether their parents believed in the Church or not. It was simply what you did. It's an interesting idea but part of the problem is that the soul is simply the English term for the bit not covered by the physical aspects of the body. Most English people would look at you funny if you started talking about Life Force instead and probably imagine you were thinking about Star Wars. Excellent chapter as always. It's a well-thought out position for you to take, just one I can't entirely agree with, especially concerning Sirius.

saugart posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 5:30am for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

Ginny always struck the right cord as to timing.

The word you want is chord.

Thanks for the story. I'm enjoying it, including your thinking about the nature of Lily's sacrifice. I was always wondering how Sirius wound up as Harry's Godfather, given that we never see him going to church in the books.

Paul Dueck posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 2:33am for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

Great Chapter, still my favorite author on this site.

Btw, is there a progress report on the next update?

- Paul Dueck

seraph7221 posted a comment on Thursday 4th May 2006 5:02pm for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

Master Vines,
I wonder how the new writing for this fic is going seeing as your chapters are very similar to the work posted at portkey which will cease to be a reservoir rather soon. As for this chapters and the others before it, while some bits are a bit much, for true this is one of two pieces of fiction that I continually seek out and read. Your plot and world are magnificent. Keep it up, I await your next offering.
Seraph

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd May 2006 3:42am for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

That article from the Evening Prophet . . . It sounds too easy to refute. We had interviews earlier from the students who gave HARRY credit. What's to stop one of them who has no love of the Ministry from going into the Prophet and saying, "Fudge is full of shit. We learned NOTHING from Umbridge. Everything I learned was due to Harry, not the ministry's useless lackey."

I like Dobby here. Great imagery.

What the hell's a "vulture" sandwich?

"Mundungus Fletcher was forbidden to talk to the two without proper supervision."
RoFLMAO

"She ignored the fact that most of the researchers in the Ministry, with all of their resources, had been unsuccessful in discovering what she wanted to find."
Okay, THERE is the reason behind making him a Spell-Monger.

Fun stuff. Okay, off to read the Granger version :)

Todd Rodgers posted a comment on Tuesday 25th April 2006 6:02am for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

Oh this was wonderful -- I especially appreciated the nod towards LoS and the godfather premise, and I find it interesting how you show Remus as a doubter.

I had been curious about how Steph and Snape would see each other -- I am not disappointed, though I probably would have hurt Snape more, considering what Steph knew about Snape. Drive the point home, so to speak.

But I think probably the best set in this particular chapter was having McGonagall latch on to the best way to reach Ron. Teachers have to do their best in a classroom setting to reach the most students, but with individual teaching they get to focus on how the student best learns. Finding out about what makes Ron tick is a great line of questioning and learning how to make it fascinating to Ron is simply brilliant.

I really enjoy this set, and look forward to more.

Eugene posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 2:54am for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

Great chapter. Both Great, Potter, This is War and The Granger Defense chapter seven have the visit with Hermione so I dont see any difference between them.

Dragen posted a comment on Monday 24th April 2006 1:34am for Chapter Seven - Harry Potter: Spell Monger, Paladin, and Heir

LoL Hermione and Harry kissing and all lovey dovey because of a potion, that part was funny... just as funny as the letter's that Harry got from Dobby, when he tried to eat his breakfast.

Finally, Harry noteic Ginny, I hope they get together soon.

Great chapter by the way and I hope you update soon.