kainboa posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 9:18am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

great chapter as usual, can't wait to see what happens next

keep up the great work :)

thefatadder posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 8:24am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Fantastic chapter, and what an ending!!!

I did enjoy the sceen in gringots. Cant wait to find out what happens to Granger.

oldman posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 8:15am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Another brilliant chapter! You are certainly building a very complete world in your many characters. Not related to Tolstoy are you?

I'm glad the elves are not tied to silly speak. Be interested how Harry changes towards his elves now he has found them out. Will he understand/learn about their powers? I have imagined a phot being taken of Harry and Ginny with Firenze to one side of them, a Goblin on the other and Dobby in the foreground and Hagrid in the back row. A sort of Harry and friends pic with a difference! Thought you might like the idea. Oldman

Amamama posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 7:08am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

*big, fat grin* Thank you! I love your stories, and this is wonderful. I wonder if I forgot to review the last chapter? Long chapters like these tend to be read with loads of interruptions, so if I forgot, I'm sorry. It was as good as the earlier, and as good as this. Your epic story is fun to read, all the layers you have are quite entertaining, you surely give Harry a full life!

The Lovegood revelations and reunion was great, and as good an explanation for Luna's behaviour as any I've read. Harry and Justin FF becoming business mates is cool, his add-on for Ron's broom even more so. Seriously, he could make a lot of money with those, he should patent it. This ending has me worried, though - but that was the meaning, wasn't it? A nice, little cliffie to keep up the tension until next chapter comes out. Not that I mind. :-D

Thanks for sharing.
Cheers!

Tero Alanne posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 12:00am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Was that the longest deviation from the Granger defence story? I think it was. And I really like the fact that the two are starting to differ from eachother. Or was this just a one chapter thing because of Ginny's birthday?

The last few chapters have been a bit slow but I don't mind really. Maybe Harry will see some action soon.. A little undercover work with Stephen perhaps? That would be seriously cool but maybe not that suitable for this story (it is a bit serious)..

Oh and this update came as a suprise to me.. wasn't expecting one for a long time! So thank you! I'm really looking forwards to new chapters of this story.. I even did a little jig when I noticed this one, I have to admit :)