"Great Scott, Potter, This is War!"
Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International
By Aaran St Vines
Reviews
Gardengirl posted a comment on Monday 29th January 2007 1:57am for Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International
Well said, Aaran, and nicely backed up, Kokopelli! I see no reason to leave Christianity out, and many reasons to include it in our fan fiction. I'm glad I'm not alone in doing so!!!
Oh, and I enjoyed the negotiations as well. It's always nice to see Fudge thwacked.
Keep the updates coming, please?
mad_maudlin posted a comment on Sunday 28th January 2007 3:56pm for Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International
In regards to your end author note I simply say Bravo! I am not a christian and at best could charitably call my self agnostics or on my bad days an out an dout atheist. However nothing annoys me more than when someone rights a truly entertaning story like yours then people complain because the don't like the religous leanings or this and that. Forgive the phrase but "MY God,' what a bunch of idiots. Just because an author expressees a religous belief in a story dosen't mean jack. If it bothers you that much then stop reading. Me personanlly, I can't stand slash stories. So I simply don't read them. I don't demand the author change them. I certainly don't complain that the author is trying to force homosexuality upon me. I except the simple fact that fanfic writers don't get paid to do so. So I in turn have no right to complain about their work.
As a friend of mine once told me, " To have the right to complain about something, One must first have paid the price to open your mouth."
So if anyone that reads this wants to order any of the fanfic writers out their to do something. I say they should first have to pay a quarter for every thing they want changed. And that quarter buys them the right to have the author actually read their complaint.
Jeff1 posted a comment on Sunday 28th January 2007 3:05pm for Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International
Great chapter. I must say that I love the addition of Christ to the Harry Potter world. More than once I have wanted to write a story melding my faith and the Potterverse, but find I lack the talent. Thanks for writing this story and please keep it coming.
Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 28th January 2007 2:57pm for Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International
Whether or not the story is "spicy" is of no consideration as to the quality of story telling, plot, sheer skill and dialogue which entertains and feels as though one is eavesdropping on real conversations. Please ignore the critics, and know that I for one, very much enjoy and appreciate your writing, and knowing that I can give it to my sub teen daughter or my clergyman with being ashamed or worried.
thanks so much for sharing your skills and interests in such an excellent manner.
warmest regards
Mickey posted a comment on Sunday 28th January 2007 2:21pm for Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International
Very nice. I especially liked your descriptions of Christianity in the HP universe, despite the fact I do not believe Christianity would have as central a position as a religion in the Wizarding world as you and Kokopelli seem to hold. I did find Harry's conversation with the Headmaster somewhat stilted but I suppose that might be simply the two of them trying to work out their new relationship.
Mickey
P.S
Who's the third author who tries to accuratly enter Christianity in their stories?
NuvaChaos posted a comment on Sunday 28th January 2007 2:06pm for Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International
This was a very good chapter in a very good story. Although I'm not religious myself, I don't really understand why anyone would flame someone for putting religion into a fanfic. The heavier philosophy among Christianity and other religions is something that I don't really enjoy reading in fanfic stories, so I tend not to read those ones. In the case of this story though, I don't think that religion has actually played that major a role, and in some senses it even seems reasonable to include it. There are many novels and fanfics out there that inlcude Holy Magic, or magic based on prayer as a reasonable type of magic, and I have absolutely no problem with that. If other faiths have magical symbols that are used, then there is no reason that Christianity should not. That being said, I'm certainly no expert on any religion and I hope I've not offended anyone.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 28th January 2007 1:20pm for Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International
One minor typo, "...have no been killed..." should be "...have no more been killed..."
Beyond that, a quite delightful read. I especially loved the negotiations with the Vampires. *wicked chuckle* The good Baron really missed an elementary lesson in tactics, "Be sure you know your target in detail. 'Twas the details of who his target was that cost him." I'm surprised he didn't expect preparedness on the part of one who'd seen that much combat; but arrogance will get you every time.
tula posted a comment on Monday 29th January 2007 4:07am for Chapter Thirteen - Harry Goes International