joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 9th September 2009 11:56am for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

This chapter hit the spot nicely.

Rexnos posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 7:08pm for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

I'll probably leave another review in a few days on your current chapter, but I've just got to say right now that you've got one hell of a history going throughout this thing. I've read a lot of fan fiction and I don't think I've ever come across a story with a deeper or more well thought out history. I'm extremely impressed, though I have to admit it can be a bit overwhelming at times.

Anyway, I'm hooked at this point so I'll be reading on over the next week or so. Expect another review once I get to the end!

Later,
Rex

clt_71 posted a comment on Wednesday 24th January 2007 9:49am for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

I don't review often, but when I do, it is usually something that has either really caught my attention or tickled my fancy. In this case...it is both. I love this story. however, the last bit about the Wearwolf Relief Fund is just too hilarious!!! I howled (pun intended!) when I read that. Keep up the good work.

harryp123 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd January 2007 7:28am for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

Good chapter. Can't wait to read what the next one is.

Jarrod posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd January 2007 2:49am for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

I gotta say I love your concepts...from Spell Mongering, to the basic definition of magic to the different theories behind the spells. I believe I speak for us all when I say we want more.

Rich posted a comment on Monday 22nd January 2007 9:45am for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

Fantastic,
particually liked the interaction between Harry and the goblins and the business arrangements, kind of reminds me of This Means War in a very good way :)

Also enjoyed the authors note at the end, nice extra detail!

Please keep up the good work :)

knightsbridge posted a comment on Sunday 21st January 2007 9:00pm for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

Great writing...got that out of the way first.
Having been top of my graduating class (chemistry, physics, unorthidox and advanced)prior to going into medicine, I am fascinated by your Spell Mongering theory and history lesson.
You have brought Harry from the scared little boy in year one to a man and a force to be reckoned with (and then some). Thank you for taking the time to flesh out the characters. I look forward to more great writing...lol, and of course the next chapter.

KateHC posted a comment on Sunday 21st January 2007 2:22pm for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

This chapter is amazing in its complexity. There is so much to admire and comment on but I particularily enjoyed all of the interactions with Gultangk.

Harry has indeed grown up. He knows what he wants to do and does not suffer fools at all.

PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Sunday 21st January 2007 1:39pm for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

I absolutely love these stories!! (I'm reading both versions) Keep up the amazing work. I am astounded the level of detail you delve in to. Great, GREAT writing!

PA

CootiePatootie posted a comment on Sunday 21st January 2007 1:32pm for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

Harry grinned. His eyes positively twinkled. "So when I donate eleven thousand and one Galleons to the Werewolves' Relief Fund, they'll know exactly what I did with their money."

BEST line in the whole chappie; though I enjoyed it immensely. LOVE the history lesson at the end, though that's not unexpected, since Makers of wands... is just about my fav. fic from you so far (though I am really enjoying this one, too.)

I'm not reading the Granger defense version because I am at heart a total H/G shipper. Truly, I can see Hermione with an older Ravenclaw or even a non-Hogwarts educated wizard, but NOT Harry and definitely NOT Ron. But that's just me! :-)

Cheers,

CP

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 21st January 2007 12:35pm for Chapter Twelve - Time with Ginny and Thunderfire

The majority of blue bits seemed to be the same in both, to me.

But still good, thanks for sharing it with us.