"Great Scott, Potter, This is War!"
Chapter Two - Defenseless? Not Defenseless at All
By Aaran St Vines
Reviews
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 10:02am for Chapter Two - Defenseless? Not Defenseless at All
Loved the backstory on Hermione's parents. I half expected them to bag a couple of order members before they stopped.
The exploding clock was great. Accidental magic really isn't
shown much after they get their letter, but it should be common
for the first three years if not more.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Friday 25th August 2006 10:05pm for Chapter Two - Defenseless? Not Defenseless at All
2 great lines "the Boy-That-Always-Lived-Through-Everything-Thrown-His-Way" and "It sounded as if time and space were being insulted right there in her sitting room". They were just fantastic. Stef Granger being ex-SAS and kicking Death Muncher arse was superb, as was the backstory. "But Stef had told her to refuse to give up until several minutes after she had died" was so brilliant. I have to stop listing lines or you'll just get a massively long list of quotes with me going "wow" occasionally. Sylvia the SAS trained cookie baker with her decorator cum assassin husband is hilarious in itself. Poor Harry!
Patches posted a comment on Monday 10th April 2006 9:13am for Chapter Two - Defenseless? Not Defenseless at All
Very good. A great chapter with a new idea. Makes standing up for oneself more understandable. Thanks for a great new perspective.
Thanks for writing. pms
Aaran St Vines replied:
I'd like to think I wouldn't be defenseless, so I wrote the Grangers as I have never seen them. I got tired of them being expendable.
Thanks for your interest in my tales.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 14th August 2008 1:36am for Chapter Two - Defenseless? Not Defenseless at All