By Aaran St Vines
Reviews
Wendi posted a comment on Wednesday 20th January 2010 6:15pm
I enjoyed this story very much, and I was seriously displeased that it ended so abruptly! Please finish this one day? Thank you for the work you have already put into it!
Little Miss Sci-Fi posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2009 9:03pm
Its such a good story! I wish you'd done more!
Gioia posted a comment on Thursday 16th April 2009 4:06pm
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I liked how you managed to keep both Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth so true to their own characters, even while removing a lot of the angst. In many ways it is their responses to the angst that defined their characters in the book, so keeping them in-character while putting them in different circumstances and eliciting different emotional responses from them is no small task, in my opinion! Thank you for the hard work you invested in this story!
Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Friday 21st December 2007 9:36pm
Sighs happily.....another excellent look at Elizabeth and Darcy! I love seeing the various ways those two can get together! Many thanks for this, and I hope you add more to it very soon!
atlantisgrrrl posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 9:33am
*clears throat*
Dear author,
you sure that this is complete? Done? Finito?
Sincerely, Vera
p.s.: I love your style, your way with words, that your Darcy and Elizabeth try for a relationship of equals. You press those JA-ff-buttons of mine like there is no tomorrow. Even if your pov kinda is a little all over the place, sometimes.
jmljasmine posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 3:51am
Please tell me this isn't the end of the story! I love how you wrote all of the characters and I can't wait to see how you would finish this at least up to the wedding.
lucyjay posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2007 3:51pm
That was very , very lovely. To have Mr. Darcy ruin Wickham's chance at making trouble in Meryton is really nice. Mr. B was very clever getting the message spread by Mrs. B. I look forward to more of ths charming story.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2007 3:27pm
This was wonderful! I so enjoy your take on things.
Mo posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2007 11:54am
You are a wonderful writer. I have been enjoying all of your great stories. This story in particular is such a relief from all the angst in other fan fiction I have been reading. I hope you are able to post the rest of this awesome story very, very soon.
Thank You
Mo
Tink Cook posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2007 10:35am
Another really great story!
I do have a question...I know you posted this as "Completed" but is there any chance you might turn it into something more? You sure left it open...
I love all your stories. Can't wait for more P&P!!!!
Hedwig12 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2007 4:49am
I love it; it is so cute!
All of theses Jane Austen fan fictions are so fun to read, so great job as usual.
Sandra Leonie posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2007 9:17pm
Pamela,
Another excellent story, I must tell you that you write very well.
Although there are alot of other JAFF websites with lots of stories - I do enjoy your storylines alot.
victorlimwd posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2007 6:08pm
Another amazing work - keep it up!
gykinga posted a comment on Sunday 27th February 2011 3:49pm