blindio posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2014 11:09pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

excellent chapter, as a mancunian though the manchester times is a long defunct paper by about 70 years when the stories set, it would be the manchester evening news :)

Melferd posted a comment on Sunday 28th October 2007 5:19am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

yikes, careful Mr. Granger, those nasty machine guns are always pesky with extra bullets!

This story is so true to voice, and yet such a tease for poor Harry/Hermione!! Do you get emails from them: Dear ASV, Please address the lack of sex, or we will sick Hermione's mom on you. Her Dad could not be counted on to represent our full wishes in this matter. Sincerely, H/Hr

PS just discovered your Jane collection...off to snuggle as close as one can to a computer for a lovely read.

lr_williams posted a comment on Thursday 20th September 2007 9:02am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

More, please. I'm trying to be patient, but more please.

mastapsi posted a comment on Friday 10th August 2007 3:53pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

I never read this before now, mostly because I wasn't sure what it was, but after reading your Ollivander fic, I decided to read this one.

Good work, I noticed one error in this chapter right toward the end. The sentence currently reads,

"Harry and Hermione talked in this intimate fashion for over an hour more before her left."

but it should read,

"Harry and Hermione talked in this intimate fashion for over an hour more before she (or is it he?) left."

A very great read!

lr_williams posted a comment on Sunday 29th July 2007 4:17am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

As always, an excellent chapter. I'm wondering how long it will be before anti-mongering legislation goes before the Wizengamot. I'm also wondering if there's a way to break the loss of right to rule for the Weasley family. Can't wait to see how you handle the story, and specifically can't wait for the next chapter.

Larry

storiesdr posted a comment on Wednesday 13th June 2007 3:43pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

The SAS keeps a wtchful eye on the activities of their former members. I think the latest news will cause that organisation to want an urgent "discussion" with Ted on his activities.

Aaran St Vines replied:

I'm way ahead of you. That's already factored in. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Wednesday 30th May 2007 2:54am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Ouch. Man that is not cool. Oh well. Anyways, good work with this chapter, though I admit the end has me a bit worked up, even after a second read a while later. The rest of the chapter I did really enjoy. The bit with ron was great also along with the elves at the end. Cheers!!!

Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Tuesday 29th May 2007 11:00am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

So will Ted be having trouble with the law now? Was that really even him or someone in a mask? Since he's a muggle he wouldn't leave behind any magical trace and I find it hard to believe that he was that sloppy.

I love the detail you provide on the political scene. I really can't wait to see more of this story and the parallels to it.

Tonya Evans posted a comment on Saturday 26th May 2007 5:50pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

I like this story. But having been in a Hermione/Harry ship. It does not work!! The brother/sister feeling never grows to what it should.
Keep up the Great work!!

petteyg359 posted a comment on Saturday 26th May 2007 2:05am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

An update to the TOC page for this story would make this chapter easier to find :) I like the stuff involving Gringotts and MID...

in-kinsfire posted a comment on Saturday 26th May 2007 1:48am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Nice story, and I'm glad you highlighted the changes.

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 25th May 2007 6:01am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Thanks I finally found it!

Prince Charon posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 3:27pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Oh, boy. Very, very interesting.

Thank you very much for updating.

More soon, please.

warpwizard posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 5:06am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Very good chapter, lots of meat. I'm loving that tension between Harry and Hermione, it's very amusing. Hopefully he doesn't eventually drive her completely around the bend. :)

Nice shock ending! Methinks Mr. Granger has a permanent new position in society and it isn't as a dentist.

Arkeus posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 3:10am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Wow...Really good. I loved all the business speak, and the inclusion of justin. The birthday, too, was nice, though i disliked the "how slytherin of you". I mean, since when are slytherin half as capable?

Great discussion between hermione and harry, poor girl, though a bit obsessed. i really hope that your hermione is magically capable, too.

in the beginning of the chapter it is said "steph granger (in the birthday part) and at the end "ted granger"...Oo

Great end.

Damn wizards.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 12:09am for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Very good chapter. Bummer at the end.

gunny

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 11:03pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Wow, an intense and informative chapter, and this and another story of yours continue to inspire me to write an HP fic. Nice cliffhanger with Dr. Granger, and the conversation Harry had with Justin, as well as with Madam Malkin develops the wizarding world a lot. Not suprising that there's a version of the mob, just like everywhere else, and will be interesting to see how they will try to go against Harry, and how he's push back, along with everything else. Harry is building a big house, but hope that he's able to develop a solid rock base, or it'll collapse.

Crys posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 12:48pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

[head swimming] You're turning into a helluva socio - political - economic teacher.

Nice backstory on the Lovegoods.

Originally, I thought that Harry was creating a racing motorcycle / Star Wars style speeder bike. Maybe something like that for seekers?

Uh, oh. Steph, I'm not convinced that was a mistake, but this is going to flame anti-muggle prejudices. Not to mention making Hermione's life difficult.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

DJ posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 12:38pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Just a question I missed in my first review. In CH1 it was Ted Granger in this CH it was Steph Granger with is right? Just wondoring.

DJ posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 12:20pm for Chapter Sixteen - Business and Pleasure

Nice work I can't wait to see what is next. I love the way you use lesser knowen people like FF. Thanks for the update see you next time.